Hi Friends, I need talented person's comments for my song "Dream Girl"

ALWAYS THINKING OF YOU

 

.........DREAM GIRL......

When you are fall in love, 
With me... With me... Ya.. 
When you are saw me in love, 
With you... With you... Ya.. 
When your eyes saw me....?
When your steps followed me...?
When you tried to face me...?
When you felt “Miss Me”... 
When your dreams kiss me... 
I found your love as gravity..... 

Speedy 
When you are fall in love, fall in love.. With me.. With me....(2) 
When you are fall in love... 
When you are fall in love... 
When you are fall in love with me......With me.. With me.. 

Stanza:1 
Never think life without me... 
Never think more about past.... 
Never think more about future.... 
Never think what will to do....? 
Live this second.... 
Live this second.... 
It's only to brings you in cheers.....(2) 
(Speedy) When you are fall in love....(1) 

Dream Girl ! 
She is my Dream Girl..... 
Dream Girl ! 
She is my Cute Girl.... 
Dream Girl ! 
She is my Nice Girl.... 
I have a lot of Dreams.... 
She also Dreams on me... 
She has a fire of eyes to me.... (Dream Girl...) 

Stanza:2 
Memories can forget the time.... 
Sacrifices(is) greater than love... 
Character(is) higher than beauty.... 
You always be in my heart as beauty..... 
Nothing... Nothing.. Nothing... 
Nothing... Nothing.. Nothing... 
Nothing is greater before our love.. 

In Speedy.. When you are fall in love...FOR 2-Times.... 

With God's Grace, 
Jai
 


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